Monday Poem, after Hughes
We rule here,
great
stomping conquerors
stinking
with hubris,
demanding
and receiving fealty,
tasting
the blood
of the defiant
and the slow,
judging.
And yet
when we've gone,
when our heavy weight
no longer presses
on the earth,
When the pennies
on our eyes
have crumbled,
Still
there will be
this
terrible beauty,
Earth rampant
on a field of sky.
Thank you to TFE for the assignment. Click here for TFE's blog, where you will find links to more Monday poems.
Monday, September 28, 2009
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11 comments:
Wow--you really did channel Ted Hughes--especially that ending which is quite good.
Why, thank you, John.
"our heavy weight" - this is brilliant
Tank you, Kathryn. I'm so glad to see you back at home!
Yes, indeed, very Hughes-y. I love the spareseness of it.
Powerful poem, Sandra, mighty indeedFealty is a good word-had to look it up!The poem reminded me a bit of Ozymandias and the 'terible beauty', of Yeats,but it was ALL Sandra and wonderful!
My favourite lines right at the end....
Earth rampant
on a field of sky.
Poignant and brilliant.
Lovely poem, Sandra, cohesive, concise, coherent, clear, powerful!
yup, i too liked the terrible beauty but it was the crumbling pennies on eyes that did it for me. powerful!
Our heavy weight indeed. Very good.
Argent - Hughes-y? That sounds so cuddly! Thanks.
TFE - In turn, I had to google "Yeats terrible beauty", as I hadn't read Easter, 1916.
Jeanne Iris, swiss, Rachel Fox - thank you all. swiss, I liked the crumbling pennies, too.
Sandra, this is lovely. This photo was one that I considered, too. I like your poetic interpretation.
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